Warning, I'm going to be quoting your entire fic at you :p
I know when I'm at the beginning of a fic and I'm already getting awesome lines like, Ms. Livia Zabini had not raised a fool, I'm in for a treat, and what a lovely one!
Kingsley smiled at him again. He was very good at that. He had a way of making it touch his eyes, a technique that Blaise had yet to master. I want to hug this line even with all its sharp edges.
He could trace his family line back to Ptolemy, and he hardly intended to have the tantrums of a secret society, in costume no less, define his own era Guh. Slytherin perfection.
His thumb and forefinger stroked the edge of the cloak, rubbing back and forth in a motion that soon had the Auror's attention back where it belonged. This is the Blaise I've been waiting to read.
What a lovely surprise this was. I had no idea where you'd take the prompt when I read you'd first chose it; this was completely different from any guess I had and so much better.
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I know when I'm at the beginning of a fic and I'm already getting awesome lines like,
Ms. Livia Zabini had not raised a fool, I'm in for a treat, and what a lovely one!
Kingsley smiled at him again. He was very good at that. He had a way of making it touch his eyes, a technique that Blaise had yet to master.
I want to hug this line even with all its sharp edges.
He could trace his family line back to Ptolemy, and he hardly intended to have the tantrums of a secret society, in costume no less, define his own era
Guh. Slytherin perfection.
His thumb and forefinger stroked the edge of the cloak, rubbing back and forth in a motion that soon had the Auror's attention back where it belonged.
This is the Blaise I've been waiting to read.
What a lovely surprise this was. I had no idea where you'd take the prompt when I read you'd first chose it; this was completely different from any guess I had and so much better.
Thanks for sharing!